(Kindle ePUB) Berzerker Twirled World Ink #1 by J.M. Dabney

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Les were meant to be broken Bezerker was his idea of perfection large husky and tattooed; the thick grab worthy beard was a bonus So when the boyfriend became the ex Landon decided it was time to get his man With the help of the matchmaking Twirled Crew can Landon finally get Berzerker to see him as than a friend and the employer’s son Author's Note Although this is the first book in a series each book is a standalone and every book deals with a separate couple 2nd Edition REEDIT. I enjoyed reading this and it was a feel good read but there were a fair few grammatical errors And on occasions it took some working out as to whose point of view you were reading However i ll definitely be checking out the next in the series

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Berzerker Twirled World Ink #1

This is a previously published edition of ASIN B01N0KDB60Welcome to Twirled World Ink where the crazies run the asylum The hum of a tattoo machine was Brian “Berzerker” Anderson’s favorite sound in the world He’d won a coveted spot at Twirled World Ink with a legend in the business Gib Phelps Creating beauty with his large scarred hands was his happy place the place where he fit in the world Although nothing could remain perfect forever his boyfriend of over a year decided. I both loved and hated this story fiercelyLet me start with what I loved about this cute friends to lovers romanceI loved how Landon and Zerk interacted with one another I loved that once they finally get together there is no bs or jealousy games they trust each other implicitly and are there for one another I loved the fun passionate sex scenes The two definitely know what turns their cranks and they are all about giving each other what they needI loved the secondary characters I can definitely see how this series could be awesome I especially loved that even with the psycho ex this was still a low angst romance read I appreciated that than I can sayBut with all I loved about this story I was still hard pressed not to throw it out and DNF Why The editing and proofreading for this story is horrible Between the grammar punctuation and editing mistakes I was nearly pulling my hair out I seriously than once contemplated just not finishing it Which would have been a shame because it is a fun light sexy story and just the sort of thing I usually highly enjoy Bottom Line The bones of the story itself was good enough that I ll try the next in the series out and see if the editing and proofreading has improved Galley copy of Berzerker Twirled World Ink 1 provided by the author in exchange of an honest review This review has been cross posted at Gay Book Reviews

J.M. Dabney × 9 review

To move on and up without him in tow He had two choices return to living with his friends and co workers or take an offer too tempting to pass up Landon Phelps grew up in an unconventional home as the only child to Legendary Tattoo Artist Gib Phelps and mother Peaches He always felt a bit out of place when he became a boring accountant instead of following in his parents’ footsteps Boundaries were in place early on; he didn’t date the employees of Twirled World Ink Sometimes ru. The first thing I had to do while reading this was turn off any need to correct or notice the bad grammar and editing found in this I can only hope that in time as the author gains experience these will be things that get remedied because there were a lot of mistakes and it did get distracting at timesThe second thing I noticed however was how much fun this was The characters felt very fleshed out and had both a gritty real feel to them with a bit of fictional fairy tale uality that allowed them to do things they probably wouldn t do had them been actual peopleThere s very little angst in this a few run ins with a douchey ex and some internal struggles but most of this is a slow burn romance of two people who ve been eyeing one another finally giving in to their desiresThe smexy times are pretty hot and the vague Ds uality to their relationship was light enough that it didn t bother me too muchI thought Landon and his parents were a trip and I look forward to Landon s matchmaking in the future Zerk and his adorable dog were sweet as well and he was a great counterpart to Landon s goody two shoeness While I had low expectations for this I found I was very pleasantly surprised and I look forward to reading in this series425 rounded to 45 of 5 stars


10 thoughts on “Berzerker Twirled World Ink #1

  1. says:

    Reread October 2017This is one of my go to authors I reread this series when I just need easy does it Reread April 2017I enjoyed it just as much if not the second time I love this whole series Original read February 2017I really enjoyed this once I got used to the writing It was a bit different and I had a hard time following along at times BUT these two were great together and deserved each other It was funny at times and I lov

  2. says:

    Damn I loved Zerk and Landon These boys were perfect for each other Low on angst high on love and family This book was great for me Ze

  3. says:

    I both loved and hated this story fiercelyLet me start with what I loved about this cute friends to lovers romanc

  4. says:

    It drove me berserkThis wasn't a terrible story and it might have had potential with plot and a less pointless sub plot There was some characterization but everyone was made too extreme too outré to the point of being little than caricatures including the overuse of nicknames for everyone Normally I excuse some editing errors in a self pub book but this was so badly written with run on sentences poor punctuation and badly const

  5. says:

    Thirst things first things like this Misspelling nightmare; poor sentence structure; telling not showing A shame because this was a

  6. says:

    The first thing I had to do while reading this was turn off any need to correct or notice the bad grammar and editing found in this I can only hope that in time as the author gains experience these will be things that get remedied because there were a lot of mistakes and it did get distracting at timesThe secon

  7. says:

    In desperate need of editing but I was still engaged with the story and this tattooed pierced and unabashedly w

  8. says:

    this was a nice story with the emphasis on niceZerk and Landon are perfect for each other and the romance was very smoothlove the rest of the crew and can't wait to read the other books

  9. says:

    I enjoyed reading this and it was a feel good read but there were a fair few grammatical errors And on occasions it took some working out as to whose point of view you were reading However i'll definitely be checking out the next in the series

  10. says:

    Even rough and tumble big bearded bears need love tooThis cover is so perfect; Zerk is gorgeous Zerk is a tattoo artist at Twisted Ink Those guys are crazy every single one of them They're family though and if they were real people